Fantastic job for your first dubstep track. I have some suggestions on what could be altered/replaced/removed:
• The music was a bit repetitive. Maybe contrast between different sorts of techno sounds, but still keep the same duration of the sound. (People won't like very similar dubstep music)
• Next time, you could add Electro Waves or Dub Wavs (I think it's called Dub Wavs anyway) to make your new dubstep tracks more interesting.
• Last and final advice, people normally like dubstep hardcore, but your style is pretty different and creative.
Things that don't need changing at all:
• The voices in the songs are spot on! They were expertly-placed!
• The fades kept you in the song. Keep using those fades Geo!
Hopefully you can respond, I would love to have what you would say about these things! Who did you get inspired by? (Yourself?) Anyway, great work on this!
(This is my first huge review I've done on anybody, and the first advice thingy I said wasn't entirely correct, I meant it like 'keep the same sort of techno style, but kind of contrast it between different sorts to change the tone' or something like that. Thanks, and keep on creating, I wanna see how much better you can get at these!