Too short, needs music, a better storyline. It was really easy but this is a nice start. Keep working at it!
Reviews for "Inconel"
Review: the art was fine and there was a good idea here but it didn't seem to come through. It needs background noise or music, the text should be black not white because of the light blue transparent background and the rest of the colors in the flash are light colors, it makes it hard to read, any area that requires you to click needs to be bigger its very hard to be spot on with a mouse or what ever there called on laptops, It needs more of a story line and plot,
wew i don't get it? ._.
Go to school.
oh for god's sake honey, please PLEASE redo this with the right spelling and grammar. ;) other than that i am REALLY liking this so please, step up and make this GREAT with those two weensy little adjustments! ;)