I didn't know what to expect of this. It just seemed like a strange cartoon at first. It really did get better! The fight sequences were quite creative and well done. They didn't make much sense, but they didn't have to. I'm glad everything worked out for them in the end.
See? I'm sympathizing with these characters. Oh, I get it now, he was a giant worm, which chickens eat, right? It was a pretty triumphant style cartoon. I'm glad this was featured.
I really appreciate getting all sorts of views on the outcome of these animations, always glad to read a "train of thought"-like commentary :).
Thanks for the review once again!
Great animation! Trying to mimic StejkRobot's style is a tremendously difficult task, but I do believe you have a really nice animation on your hands. I would have liked to see more small/subtle movements in the character animation, but that's me being nit-picky. Best of luck!!!!
This turned out to be the thoughest round ever, hahah! I still agree that there's a lot of tweaking to do in the animation, I actually hope to take the time fix some bits.
Thanks a lot CroMagg!
Nice big animation here. Very well-done, this really looks top-notch. I think it was a little too long/slow, or perhaps lacked something immediately gripping to keep the viewer's interest. For instance, the pause before the robot crumples is a little excessive. Other than that really great job.
Room for improvement...
- Needs more short 3-4 frame loops to show a dynamic environment
- Use less symmetry
- Color outside the lines a little more, reducing brush smoothing isn't enough to imitate your opponent's style
Yeah I agree with plenty of things; although because of deadlines there's always tons of room for improvement; I'm still glad this got to a higher level of production.
Thanks for dropping by!
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The style and Art of this was awesome! :] I thought it was original but the shots could have used a little more thought and the animation was a little iffy in places, but overall it was great!