very good
I didn't take it as religious since the goat thing wrote the response, but the response was effective all the same. Great animation and the sound was subtle, but effective. Keep up the great work!
Reviews for "Jack - The chalkboard"
'Jack' animated r00ls
I'm an Avid reader of the Jack Comics, their gory depiction of the pitfalls of life, death, and sin put a new spin on all our tasty ill concieved concepts of what these things are.
Work on your animation skill a bit, and maybe, think 'prophecy' (the movie/s) with the Jack comics, I always read them and think of some quiet greggorian chant or something. Find something that lends well to the whole 'foreboding of these comics, and try fading clickery (any foley sound effect that repeats)
Hope thats helpful, keep it up!
Awesome
thats all I gottta say!
Well Done
Good choice first of all; that one had an interesting message.
Second, Dave's drawing style got accurately captured and nicely animated I should add.
My only peeve would be that the pace was too slow, even for this particular short (must the silence that made it felt like that).
Otherwise, I have to say that you did a great job. :3
Simply fantastic
While I may not read the webcomic, this was still one of the greatest underrated flashes submitted to Newgrounds. I first saw it years ago, and realized how deeply it touched me. It does not matter that there is not a lot of sound or anything. What matters is that you send us a truly powerful message that any religious person can relate to. We as humans have done so many bad things in this world, but we have also done so many good things. What matters is how we choose to look at it and change ourselves.