Robber robbed
Reviews for "Robbed"
Cool. Good stuff. It doesn't matter too much that the idea has been done before. I mean, basically everything's been done 8000 times. I liked your take on it anyway.
Congrats on making it to the next round. I hope you haven't run out of ways to pizzazz that logo.
Brewster responds:
Thanks, yeah I'm gonna have go all out on this next jaltoid logo
A hilarious story, well voiced and a good extension of the theme. Use of symbolism and hyperbole are spot on.
Brewster responds:
Thanks, glad someone finally sees the deeper meaning
I personally loved the progression of the story: how it starts as our protagonist robbing a bar, then it just becomes two guys just bonding, then it becomes the bar owner robbing him! The main issue is that you could end right at "oh, that was my last bullet" rather than cutting to a brief scene of the protagonist leaving. It completely takes the energy out of the conclusion when you have the extraneous bit at the end. Otherwise, I really liked it!
Brewster responds:
I wanted to have the bookended robbed title card at the end so thats why that happened, I also wanted to do the bow. But either way thanks for the review!!
Hmmm. Kind of a ripoff of "a depressed whale", I think. You should have ripped off Zulway God of Mercy or Gods of Olympus instead, those were much better. Well, it was ok. But I think if you're going to go to the trouble of making animation, you ought to make the actual content completely awesome. Kind of like when you see a webcomic with excellent art that obviously took a long time to make and spelling errors in the word bubbles, or things like failing to understand "your" vs. "you're" or "quite" and "quiet" that would take 30 seconds to do right.
GodLosifer what the hell, no this couldn't be an actual feature length movie plot. How can anyone capable of comprehending human languages think that? What the hell, it was a brief gag. And not even a very good one. Don't ever become a screen writer, you would end civilization. No wait. Yes. Become a screen writer. Because I want to end civilization. Burn it. Burn it all!
Brewster responds:
Never saw a depressed whale until right now. It doesnt surprise me that the concept of robbers robbing robbers has been done before though. Someone probably did it before filmcow, I guess this is just my take on the idea.