Quite good for a first animation, it's a lot better than most things that appear here on NG as for the material it was a pretty funny dramatization of a Markiplier video. For a start I think you are on the right track, learning by trying things out is a great way to learn and I'm pretty sure if you need some tips you can ask someone here. Hope to see more from you and good luck with your future endeavors.(\^E^(\