I like it
Reviews for "Practicing the SFM:Basics"
this seems pretty interesting...it wasn't bad...but the way you fumbled over the guy who didn't like the plot was not the way to go about that...because everything here was pretty good and the voices were good too...but you really shouldn't try to defend anything....but instead make it better...and that doesn't mean promising a better plot...it means instead think of ways to reach that point were you and the person who thinks something was lacking are both satisfied...
still i hope to see more of your work...its solid....no issues or inconsistencies that are noticeable to me....the voices are fine and the jokes were not that bad....
McPhearson responds:
Thank you.