You really need someone to look over the English spelling and grammar in your text in the game before you release your game to the public. This is embarrassing at times:
"You blocked been hit for 2 damage!"
*Cringe*.
Reviews for "Monster In the Closet"
One point less cause when i started to get involved by the story it appears the Demo advertise.
It's a good game, maybe you could give more variety in the battle, but the story is great.
Keep he good work and don't be so hasty.
The was awesome But 1 thing I dont sleep
when its 8 am :P
zzzzz crappy and the chest could not open!!! I clicked like 100 times
Funny, and can be used to create a good story. The storytelling wasn't half bad, too, especially in the intro.
Some things that need addressing - repeated sword and tonic drinking, you might want to add a variable, which drinking the tonic sets to 1, which when set to 1, changes the "look through the pile of rabble" action's result into "You spend some time looking through the rabble, but nothing else can be found", and remove the strenght and defense variable increase.
I guess you know how to do this, and just didn't since it's a demo. Well, my friend, good job with releasing the demo, but do not stop here. When I did develop games, I always released demos with bugs when I was tired of working at the game and couldn't reach the end. So i just put together what I had made till that point and then post it without working on it anymore. Don't be like me, actually work to this thing 'cause if you do something good can come out of it. And you'll be able to tell a story, which is the most important thing.
Shoot for the stars!