Not bad for your first attempt. But maybe add in some more jokes next time.
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DrownedKarkat responds:
I'll try to.
I thought if the voice acting was better you wouldn't need subtitles. Plus I'm not sure what direction you were trying to go with it. Was it supposed to be random, serious or funny? Or is this how "Homestuck" humor and characters are portrayed? This IS your first attempt though. I'm not being overly critical, I'm just trying to be honest so you can improve on what you can do. You'll get better over time if you keep at it.
DrownedKarkat responds:
Hmmm i'll go with random. i couldnt get much done because i was on a timer which gave me this result.
BU!