The comedy wasnt my cup of tea but it was a admirable job. I thought the music was distracting that it took away comedic scene with those facial expression. Some of the direction felt it didnt mash up together that it felt arkward to me.
Some might gripe about the uses of 3D aide but I thought some anime shows used it quite well like "Arpeggio of Blue Steel" or those 3D scene in "Black Rock Shooter.
I guess since this is going for an anime style feel. The expectation from the audience is much higher. Its really hard to achieve this style. I am trying to achieve this style myself and I am not even close.
Nonetheless; good luck on your next project