Not A Bad Trailer
It's a good trailer for the fact it gives the viewer a taste of what to expect, but no indication of who is who. It makes one curious how all of these elements will come together (even though we already know there's nothing more to come at the present according to the Author's Comments). The guy in the hood doesn't necessarily have to be the bad guy and the guy in love doesn't have to be good. My one suggestion to improve this piece is to make each scene a bit shorter because it's killing the pacing of the trailer. Each scene would be more effective if they lasted as long as a heartbeat.
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Other than that minor point, this is an excellent piece. It's very well drawn and does its job as a trailer. And, yes, it IS humanly possible to make a story out of this because it contains all of the elements you'll find in any great book of suspense and intrigue. Work on the story because it seems you have a good thing here! Best o' luck!