very nice sounds
At first, this is a track based on very simple sounds which u deffinatly proved that doesnt have to be a bad thing. (sorry for my english, but it is not my native language ;))
trance isnt a genre with as many (fast) sounds together. Make 1 base line, 1 melody (2:50) and 1 thing that keeps coming back (those sounds at 2:30 might be to softh for that) but at 3:18 its just to much. Make that last line a little less beats but do let it in to the sound.
Might be a bit confusing, but I hope that u get what I mean. (only 1 hour from now at di.fm 8) armin at astateoftrance)