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Reviews for "A Moment of Adventure"
sweetcommando responds:
in the butt
animation was really crude, jokes were forced, voice acting was, well... a few puts shot of par but nonetheless your animations do show improvement, so good luck mate
Kept me guessing kept me laughing! Loved it!
I liked how the key-posing was unpredictable and quite dynamic, and the animation was sometimes decent, but all-in-all the whole thing was just overly-obnoxious and forced, I didn't find anything funny about it and it didn't seem like any of the jokes came up naturally whatsoever. It seemed more like "hey, people must think this joke is funny, so I'll just jam it into the script randomly right here!" There's too many people doing that now.
sweetcommando responds:
I know, i know, i need to work on my writing. But its really hard to do that since im mostly focusing on the animation stage. But thanks for the feedback anyway.
Love your work by the way!
dat bubble gum ass. lol this was funny