Kinda hot but very short.
You should also consider repositioning her hands and lightening her far leg. I get you're going for a shadow look but its way too much. Especially when surrounded by fire.
And the walk itself wasn't too sexy. It was quite... 'stormy' like she going to go kick someone's ass for touching her muffin. You need more of a glide with the while body and move the arms more with the legs than you are doing. Slow her pace just a little bit.
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