Stop referencing egoraptor, I counted at least two times that the dude had facial expressions like Kenstar from Girlchan... It's not that he owns it, but you should at least strive to be more original.
Reviews for "PokeGen XY"
I don't even know what the point of this was supposed to be. The whole thing was just juvenile and uninteresting. Also the chair Pokemon joke alone has been ridiculously overdone by this point in time, let alone the whole 'omg new pokemon are so weird' thing. I'm giving this two stars though because at least the voice work was well done.
Constantly changing styles makes for a bad animation. And there was way too much random weird gross stuff. I guess I'll go back to just watching videos made by the people I know I like.
Good animation and art... but the horrendously shallow level of imagination put into the script just killed this for me. Can't think of a punchline? Tits and a random explosion... yeah... clever.
Very unoriginal. Not going to say that you shouldn't get inspired by other comedians or animators, but at least bring something new to the table