for a game driven off of a written text narrative it is directly impacted by the ability to use proper grammar and therefore this game was difficult to get into the story
Reviews for "The Shai Job"
The story is very original. I can already imagine a cyberpunk-china town setting just from the dialogue. The endings were more of flashbacks than anything though, which is actually quite good for me. My advice is you remake this game, adjust the shooting segments, adjust your grammar, but continue with the simple style. The graphics are fine with me, gives off the novel setting more because of it. An idea like this shouldn't be rushed. The music could be jazz, with a mix of opera.
Not bad, but it definitely needed a spell check. There were several instances of 'your' being misused for 'you're' to the point where when someone actually DID use 'your' correctly, I assumed they meant 'you're' and I was very confused for a few minutes.
I got the 2nd ending and I'm also confused. I would have liked a bit more explanation. Who is Charlie?
It definitely has potential. Spell check and music would help. Overall an alright game that could use lots of work.
I created a user account just to write a review for this game. I had to stop on the first page where "your" was used in place of the correct "you're." At that point I was done and did not play any further. It ruined it for me.