Love the characters simplicity
Love the storytelling and use of montage
Love the backgrounds and the animation itself was great, despite a lot of strangely anamorphic things you had to FBF
Love the concept
The music was great but I may have chosen something a little more spritely, and the voices were pretty good acting wise, but i'd like to see maybe a little more cartoony and expressive voices, if that makes sense. Either way great job