Why such a low score? animation is great, backgrounds are INSANE, I have the feeling of shooting someone when he doesnt rise the part of the toilet made to sit, and slpashes all over (english is not my language)
Great animation.
Reviews for "Toilet Zone"
loberoso responds:
Really thank you guy!! It's cool you like it.
(english is not my language too) haha
Cool short. The background looks great, and I really like the animation.
While I liked the ending (it was definitely unexpected), I think it would have been even better had the character walked past the sink before 'facing his fate'. In my opinion, it wasn't readily apparent that he opted not to wash his hands.
Still, just a small critique. Overall, it was very good.
loberoso responds:
Thank you, man. And I actually thought about that, and some friends said the same... however I hadn't time enought to try to make it clearer :/
But it seems like it worked... so...
Anyway, thanks for the critique! It's always helpful :)
(by the way... I thought the fact of he put his hands in his pockets would be enough to communicate his wasn't going to wash it)
The animation is really great, but the storyline? Not so. Although, I got the point that washing your hands after using the toilet DOES kill you (Hepatitis, flu, etc.), the gunshot is a little overboard for a metaphoric example. Still, a really good short movie.
loberoso responds:
There isn't a storyline or any intention to make it great, it's just a simple joke anyway.
However thank you!
Dude jumping the gun man, he could have been heding for the sink on the far left for peeps sake!
!Head shot!