Good animation. Nice job at doing a PSA.
Reviews for "Toilet Zone"
loberoso responds:
thank you!
Oh, I see the sign. Guess he's not going to wash his hands.
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People Can Fly? I wonder what the affiliation is.
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All, right, he's done, time to walk out--wait, dead before he gets to the sinks? Maybe this is about something else! I was half expecting him to actually wash his hands and Jason Vorhees standing at the entrance, dejected! We may have a decent cartoon yet.
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No, it was just confusing. I guess dude wanted to write "please" but didn't have a pen? I NEED YOUR BLOOD TO FILL OUT THIS EMPLOYMENT FORM. Fuck, I just made a better screenplay than this guy.
loberoso responds:
Hahahaha, this was the funniest review I've read until now. Thanks for it.
Yes, I admit, I hadn't a screenplay when I started to animated it. Anyway I thought the joke was clear as it is... (it seems like not)
People can fly means what you want it to mean.
However, thank you for rating (y)
Next video I'll try ro make it better, see ya
Good animation and music but wasn't funny at all.
However fuck whoever doesn't wash their damn hands what are you 3? It's a great way to stop the pread of viruses dumbasses, I work in a factory and I have to wash my hands all throughout the day because of how unsanitary it is and I see guys coming out of the pooper who dont wash their hands and I'm disgusted. There should be some sort of punishment devise that shocks the hell out of you if you dont wash your hands. Would teach you assholes a good lesson.
I never understood this obsession with washing hands. It's not like I peed on them. This whole country is full of mysophobes.
In terms of the video, the punchline is unclear. Sure he put the hands into his pocket, but considering the effort you put into the animation, you could've afforded to have him walk by the sink at least.
loberoso responds:
I see your point, I also concern about wash the hands before using the toilet. However, it was just a little joke...
about the "unclearness" maybe you're right, and thank you for pointing out, I had a considerative feedbacks about that. So in the next I'll try to make it clearer. Thank you again!
(by the way, which country are you refirring to?)
in the last week ive seen a handful or more of people not wash their hands...but i dont really think you can make the joke without vocalizing it...i didnt laugh at all and i've favorited more than one bathroom flash video before...
loberoso responds:
Okay, I totally love to know about it...
thank you anyway!