First very hilarious, then turned into a sad masterpiece. Amazing.
Reviews for "The Man Who Won't Rhyme"
Hey man, really like the animation design of the video. I also appreciated the overall theme of the animation as well as the stark and sudden ending. However, I personally don't think the homophobic character you created contributes anything but more vitriol to the conversation of same-sex relationships. Did Dude's uncle have to be so disgustingly stereotyped? I can't help but feel the character made the animation as a whole seem more immature than it is. Also, I would like to know if any of this was based off a true story. If parts of it are, I feel you should let people know in the description to be clear. I would be more moved by a story knowing it had a real, tangible component to it, because it's not a bad story. If the entire story is fictional however, I can't help but feel it contributes nothing. Just my opinion, sorry.
FrozenFire responds:
Take into account the person reciting the story. Perhaps that's how he viewed the character of Fred. Perhaps something happened between the narrator and Fred to make him feel this way.
Think outside the box. :)
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Sad story bro... Well done! Great animation and rhyming lyrics! :)
beautifully done.
Absolutely fantastic, I did not expect that. The message in this animation is very strong. Just brilliant.
Solid 5/5 for sure.