Read the review before this one.
You can almost hear him getting a swirly.
Reviews for "SALSA!"
Joxa responds:
I wanna know what a swirley is. dam american slang grrr. the last reveiwer was female tho. she has bewbs and has now een offended and will try and sue,me.
Bad Grammar
I can't stand someone who types on an animation and expects the viewing public to have sympathy for someone with bad grammar. The beginning credits with the pigs goes on far too long for any human to endure. I understand that this was a first movie, so I hope that you have created a more intellectual piece that we may enjoy now that you have this one out of the way. My suggestion to you is that if you decide to put words on the screen, not only should they be spelled correctly, but they should be slower so the reader actually has time to process what is being seen. And if you want to send someone into an epileptic seizure, then I recommend you continue using bright, flashing colors as a background.
Joxa responds:
My gramma is ollrite i fink. ill ask er, "EY GRAMMA YOO ALRITE?" "YESH"
see my grandmother is fine. as for intellectual......id rather be immature and poor but still have fun with my life.
Dolphins are a girl's best friend. I thought it was diamonds. meh
Ugh, this movie is crap.
Sorry man, but if I've ever seen a piss-poor rush-job, this movie is it. You lost the elements to a good animutation -- where the hell is Colin Mochrie and the variation to the backgrounds? And, BTW, I'm not trying to degrade you or anything, but your grammar REALLY is horrible ("vally," "livd"!?). I'd pay more attention in English class (assuming you still go to school) if I were you. The mouth movement was incorrect (you separated the entire mouth from the faces instead of just separating the lips like in every animutation I've seen, indicating the lack of effort you put into the movie (you did do it right for a couple frames). The opening (with the guys with pig masks on) was extremely bland and cheap (not to mention unfunny). Let's see... Oh yeah, nice to see the STOLEN "Doom dancers" from Neil Cicierega's FUNNY animutation, "Nya Nya Nya".
Joxa responds:
this was one of my first movies.
Mochire...yes.
i am very lazy when i type.
i cant be bothered completeing my reply ill just say hahahahaha i like vally livd.
Nice try...
Not enough effort for this one, it had plenty of Fanimutation cliche's though. Nice to see Chiu.
But this one had way too much use of a single annonying background, and not much variety besides that one baby. Next time, a little more insanity, and a little more PACE!
Joxa responds:
yeh this was my first attept at an animutation.i didnt do too bad tho i guess:D
AAAARGH!!!
Pheh. Don't use "Natsu Yasumi Fan Kurabu" (Kung Fu Phil) as the intro song next time. Also, this video is horrid. Animutations are SUPPOSED to be silly-looking, but this is just...ugly. The animation isn't smooth enough, and the transitions just don't fit. Also, there's something called TWEENING you might want to look into. Go take a look at Neil Cireceiga's stuff for a while.
Joxa responds:
thats in allllllll my intros MWAA HAHAH! neway this was more or less my first animutation,its not 100% great i know but still raises a chuckle. Yes i have seen Mr Cirecigas works and i must say they are fantastic. im just a fan who liked his style. i have many much better fanimutations,i do use more english songs tho as sometimes its easier to rip into them(dance for example makes great fanimutations) i have a japanese animutation out soon however it should be great. now thx for the reveiw and i hope u read this reply.TOINK!