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Reviews for "A Girl In A Room Collab"

The first one had some decent animation concept was alright I guess - a little creepy. There was a little bit of sexual appeal in some of the shots of the girl, and I thought that was good. The various perspectives the animator added a lot of interest to the animation. I did not like the side view of the girl's face, which gave her the impression of a gorilla

Second person's style looks really bad - I guess it was supposed to look misshapen and eerie (like salad fingers) but it just made the animator look inexperienced and lazy - Every animation needs some aesthetic, and there wasn't enough in the second animation for me to enjoy it. The slenderman-looking gentleman looked pretty creepy (the pinky was a bad decision , it gave me the impression that he was "upping the horns" and destroyed a lot of the creepiness that would have otherwise been present in the scene) and I liked the tone shift when he appeared. I enjoyed the second animator's concept the most out of anything in this collection of animations.

Third animation was stupid and destroyed the mood set by the previous animations. Some possible reasons for this - The character looked comical (not scary in any way), and the song didn't fit with the mood I expected from this animation (particularly the singers voice and the beat)
Third animator also gave the lazy impression - The animation was pretty much 3 panning still frames with some little part of it moving.

I enjoyed this to an extent. I feel like the authors could do much better.

ReklessCreati0n responds:

The ending sequence was just a simple thing to end it on a silly note. The origonal ending wouldn't have worked out with the number of submissions, so I ended up making something fairly quickly with silliness in thought.

I liked the first litte bit, I thought it was going to be cognitive but then it deteriorates and my brain is just full of what after that. I give you half a score because I enjoyed it. But the non-cognitive parts kinda ruined it for me.

Good idea but mediocre execution.
But for a Halloween submission not bad, it had me weirded out.

I really didn't understand it or enjoy watching it, I love creepy stuff and murder but this was a dissapointment

I really like the concept of this collab, but the content itself really does fall flat. The first (and main) problem with it is the pacing. This moves waaaay too slowly! I'm not sure if that was the point behind the 'suspense/horror' theme, but it didn't really work for me. The skits themselves were a little slow paced as well, but again that may have been to add to the suspense.

If you do make another one (and you should because the idea is pretty cool) focus on having it move a bit faster and come up with some really wacky scenarios. Maybe make a post in the forums and try and get a team together to help you with it :>.