I've seen worse
This was an excellent first submission. Some things that would have made this really great would have been some type of story or MGS setting. The fact that you created this in a short amount of time doesn't make my vote change at all. But it excuses the fact that you cut corners in some ways. Such as, voices, story, backgrounds, music, etc. The drawings of the people were good and looked like cartoon versions of the MGS cast but you have to understand there should be more to your work. If you had made a cartoon about Snake going on a mission with Otaku and fighting someone, etc I would have scored you MUCH higher. Why? Well because those types of things are just more fun. However I have seen worse things come from the British: the food, Marry Poppins, Lady Di, etc. I assume that your british because I don't know any Americans who go on "holiday". I'll keep my fingers crossed on that one.