not bad guys. there is definitely something i have to comment on and its visual pacing. things never felt defined enough on screen for the audience to tell what was going on, or what was trying to be conveyed. i suggest slowing down (increasing the amount of blank frames) in between each shot/sequence, allowing for more visual grasp. it allows the audience to take in the actions taking place, and gives them more memory of the situation presented.
you guys are going to go places if you can work on that =)