That movie was too epic man!! :3
Reviews for "Madness Initiation"
n21s responds:
Prepare for something else...
"One guy who want to kill another guy" ... best story ever!
Anyways pretty good animation for madness day, I did enjoy it. Sure it's not the best thing I've ever seen, but you are one the right track. Just add a bit of flow in the characters movements, and maybe a funny event here and there, and it will be awesome.
Good! First of all watch your grammar. Terrible english skills in submissions like these make the entire thing look unproffessional and also the fighting just went on and on. There were some points where I was a little bored but overall, well done! You should be proud of yourself! :)
Not bad :)
But it is lacking in some important areas, such as the white line bullets flying into the baddies and walls. AMMO, that Uzi had to have shot far to many bullets for a single mag. Idle movements, It makes it look a bit bland when they just stay there, motionless.
And finally Story, Something like "blargh, I want to kill this guy, cos he's a dick" is a bit boring (Being a hypocrite, I don't really have much of a different story than your one)
But. Don't let this stop you, you have potential.
Just try add a bit more depth into the flash next time :)
Happy Madness Day!
n21s responds:
Thanks for helpful review and happy madness day.