Honestly after watching all of these I think I'm becoming a fan of your work! Its really well done. Its like watching a good anime. Story is being built up well, animation is outstanding, voice talent is wonderful. No complaints at all. Keep them coming!
Reviews for "Unfortunate Girl:TWO pt.2"
So... when's episode THREE coming?
I don't agree with the previous review, I think this is great! The art, colors, animation, it all looks great for a one person project. Still, I think that this needs to go further, and every episode posted needs to be at least 15 minutes to really hook me. I like the story, but as far as the setting goes, its so dull. It does fit the story, yes, but it needs more flair. Voice acting is good as far as the Doctor and Karissa goes, but Shawn needs a bit of work. He seems like a nice guy sort of character, and the voice does fit him, just I feel like it needs a bit more confidence, to be louder. Voices should always have dominance in any animation or movie, rather than background music. A little more loudness and confidence on his part would be great. The story is set at the perfect pace that keeps me on the edge of my seat, though like I said, more flair! The little scenes with the nightmares aid to hint Karissa's instability, though they are too long and eat up a lot of the time that could be furthering the plot or have more dialogue. You should make this a little bit more like the film "Warm Bodies" and have that voice that speaks for Karissa in the first person, almost as if she is the narrator like you did with the first Unfortunate Girl. Overall, neat little video. Please continue it! I'm curious to see where it will end up.
The art and animation here is absolutely great. Love your colours and love your line work.
I do not like the story, or the dialogue. It just seems so cliche and almost ruined this for me.
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i'm trash
So good! Can't wait for the next one :D