unfinished? has some pacing issues, everything took too long.
unfinished? has some pacing issues, everything took too long.
It is not unfinished, it's the timing I wanted to have. I find awkward and long scenes to be funny like the opening chicken stab and at the end too.
It's just a matter of opinion, I can tell you all my breakdowns and in-betweens are there.
I just kind of suck in some aspects.
Thanks for the review!
'Tho the animations are quite nice, I found the entire flash moving at a slow pace. When during the intro the signboard had to be shown three times stabbing the chicken, I was already thinking of other things. Speeding things up would have really helped getting the joke across.
Honestly, this is something that I felt could have been really good, but the set ups for why things should have been funny were not there.
I did like the animation through.
I think I need more blood and more story
meh is good