Over all okay, but for a first animation very well done. Song was well recorded and the highlight of the upload. Animation was poor both in fluidity and style; things just sort of appeared and bounced across the screen. Very good work on the typography portion.
All in all, a nice first attempt. Keep at it and with practice I think you'll certainly work your way up.
well produced song. fun. but video is not quite there in support
You have great music, and it was an enjoyable theme, but i would've co-oped with someone for the video. It looks like you used a windows paint program, but even then I've seen some pretty amazing work come out of that program. And if you already had the music, why spend so little effort of the graphic display. And 11 hours, that's plenty of time to made a half decent character and, a more than Mario kart, Ferrari, especially sense you didn't put any time into actually animating any real motion. But, at least it's not a bad photo shopped realistic animation. But all criticism aside, congrats on your "first born" and may you learn and produce better products in the future.
The thing about it is that I want to be self sufficient with making visuals for my music. So as much as I could have others do the animating for me, I really want to dive head first into it myself. With time and practice, I'll make myself get better. Reviews like yours and most others so far are really helpful and I take everything you say on board. I will take more time in future to add more detail and clean up my drawings! Good to have the support. Cheers!
Sorry but this had very little animation, just because you are a girl i'm not going to sugarcoat it and shower u with compliments meow.
Great first flash Hania love your work I can just some how feel what you put in to your stuff. Hope to see and hear more of what you got next. :)
Yay! :D Thanks! I will be practicing backgrounds and detail next. And will upload that really soon :D