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Reviews for "Desert Spirits"

dude...10 out of 5 for pacing, style, music, and charm...in that order, good stuff! looking forward to more. my only 'real' suggestion is that i think with this sort of style you want smooth sillouettes...there was some pretty noticeable cuts between the main characters legs and torso, otherwise everything looked pretty great!

also, the audience might find it useful if you include a run-time for your shorts...otherwise you have people going "nahhh too long" instead of "well, it's only 2 minutes".

Eh, strange but, ok.

It was actually cool.

That was bizarre and random, but in a good way, also the music was really nice.

The animation appeared to be skilled as the animation is very smooth and there is an attempt to tell a story without the need of saying any words. Though the problem is that the characters appears to be very rigid and robot like movements due to the characters appearing to be formed from card boards or cut out from color papers which cause them to be less expressive and mobile. The other problem is that the story can roughly be understand and known by at least guessing but the ending is very confusing though did to try create humor in it. To me, I advise that you can use your skills to create a better animation through better art than waste it on creating a good animated animation with a meaningless or confusing story with rough arts that only manage to roughly make the character look human.