dude...10 out of 5 for pacing, style, music, and charm...in that order, good stuff! looking forward to more. my only 'real' suggestion is that i think with this sort of style you want smooth sillouettes...there was some pretty noticeable cuts between the main characters legs and torso, otherwise everything looked pretty great!
also, the audience might find it useful if you include a run-time for your shorts...otherwise you have people going "nahhh too long" instead of "well, it's only 2 minutes".