everyone seems to think the same thing here, this game has a problem with convince. it seems you are trying to get across a message about honoring your mother, staying true to your faith, and the price of sin. all of these could make for an interesting story ark if you had a more in-depth game. there is a game called "flexible servile" it is a text based RPG where you walk around a dieing world and oyu need to find food and water as you explore you will be approached by monster or demons sometimes helping them will net you rewords other times it will turn you into a monster yourself. maybe that form of game would fit your needs. what do you think? thank you have a good day.