I loved this deep deep story. building on an idea is a good thing! the lighting and effects and angles were all great. I especially loved the way his environment changed from one scene to another. Super nice. I think some better voice acting would greatly improve this animation.
Good luck in this round.
Reviews for "Dual Sanity"
Mrcoleman responds:
I'm still working on my voice acting. Comparing this to Green Sky, I feel I'm making somewhat of an improvement if any. Thanks, for watching.
Animation is quite good, you use some really nice backgrounds.
Story is amazingly thought through, really good job on this.
Voice acting is a bit less, that's why I'm reducing my rating with 1 star. Not that the voice acting is bad, but I just think that the voices don't fit that well...
Wow! this was really interesting I think the animation could have been better but overall it a had a good story line and good theme music this kind of stuff is hard to find and you got it thank you!!
Mrcoleman responds:
I like writing deep stories. I can agree with the animation, there's still more things I need to work on.
relly good
good animacion
just if u could add some more colors or details becaus some parts look a bit emthy
over all i like it
Mrcoleman responds:
Thanks, I wish I could of added more detail in the background but I had to keep my remaining time in mind. So in the end, the details had to be lessen to a certain extent :(
its was good had a nice twist to it next time add a little more depth into the animation and character voice while tuning out the music in the background i felt it took away from the story of what was going on
Mrcoleman responds:
While I was editing the music in the animation I literally had one hour left to upload it. I should have double checked for errors before uploading. The pressure XD