Over the top with clashing titles and character expression animation, try spaning your work out through the flash and using detailed stills to show expression, gets the job done with better results, if your trying to stand out as an artist you got to realize story is an art and art is a story, what you make will only be a refection of you as an artist and that artistes progress and vigor! And that vigor seems low when it comes to thought. Cant just write then draw something, you have to drawl out that something that makes for a good write then draw in refection of or feelings of that story, good story will lead to good work. And as for short flashes go, not hard of enough of a punch line. - ahighslomo lv13 neutral
Reviews for "Silence of The Lamps"
nevarky responds:
What?
I'll give you a star because your animation was really good, but the punchline was so incredibly childish. Next time think of something better than calling someone a faggot when you're trying to say they're stupid or insane in this case. I'm pretty sure you could've thought of something better to say.
I agree with the guy below. Good animation, terrible voice acting on her part.
i give you 1/2 star for all the work you put into something that makes no sense and isn't funny. i mean, really?, your punchline is that she calls him a faggot? be sure to high-five the 6th-grader who sold you that joke. the art and animation are good but you wasted talent on this.
nevarky responds:
I thought it was funny and I would do it again, I don't see how I wasted "talent" on this if I made something I liked.
If anything I feel the second part is what people don't like the most, the whole fading out thing, I would probably re-consider adding that or try to implement in a different way, that's for sure, but I still like the faggot joke, sorry I'm childish, but I am.
That's IT?
what a waste of time.