I like the voice acting, and the simplicity of the game. Try making it a little more neat next time though, the tutorial could use work, and the drawings could use a little more effort. Good template/start though!
Reviews for "Wooly Marenal RPG"
when you click to skip dialogue, please have it simply show the full text first, THEN skip once you click again. I found myself trying to skip through because i read fast, and ended up missing quite a bit of dialogue. Although i appreciate the in depth voice acting, it just moves a little slow for your average gamer, i feel.
clearly you are not finished and are just looking for feedback, but i'm not sure whether you meant to have 2 players, or for the player to actually be fighting themselves. perhaps if you are having difficulty with having the monsters act a certain way depending on their situation/ what was used on them, simply add a short 3-4 move looped script for their combat.
i thought the dice visuals were cool, but tended to take far too long to stop rolling. consider making this animation much, much faster, because even after finishing the first battle, i found myself very irritated at having to wait for this each round when it's just 2 6 sided dies rolling.
essentially so far i think you've got a good thing going, but definitely consider how certain aspects of a game such as this (especially if you mean to stick to a combat+dialogue only system) grow very tedious as they repeat themselves.
consider adding 2 more preset characters to start with (u can keep the same dialogue or w/e and just change weapon sets i.e. warrior, archer, wizard, etc)
perhaps instead of just the regular attack, go for a power attack/flurry/critical strike system such as what is used in KoToR?
music was great, btw. did you make that yourself? i was just playing yellow version earlier today.
Holon responds:
Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep them in mind for future updates.
As for the music, they're from the Audio Portal and can be found on the credits to the left.
Great cinematic production...however I have to agree that the battle was way too random, the first monster kicked my ass 3x in the row and I gave up...
I kinda like it for the story line and the musc but the game play sucks
Decent game
The visual aspect of it could be more flashy and more dynamic, The game itself could use more strategic control by the player, Voice acting is awesome and graphics is awesome, The turn based style is always fun and I had some fun with this game.
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