Not half bad, but as expected there are a few tips here and there I would touch up on. First off, there tends to be a lacking of background music at certain points that have no real reason for it to be silent. Then there's the animation, it's almost like you're going for a cartoony vibe, but not quiet hitting the nail on the head, same with the voice acting, it seems to lack a full emotion into it. I'm personally looking forward to this series getting a little better because besides it's minor flaws it does seem to be a very interesting addition here on newgrounds. ^-^