This is actually pretty nice! Hahaha I lol'd a few times :P
keep it up!
(cant wait t il ep 2)
Reviews for "Married to a Porn Star"
mustachewax responds:
Yes! Thanks!
puns everywhere, pretty good, but the animation needs some work though
Shtick
honestly, i thought that the dry humor was pretty funny, and basically my feelings are that this is a stab at sitcoms, in general, which i think is pretty fitting. as for this becoming an actual webseries, please...... just dont. there is nothing wrong with this skit, but its just something that is best left alone, and its funnier on its own. you see, when you make parodies and intentional take-offs of popularized pop culture, current news and events, etc., you can appeal to a much wider audience as everyone can pick something to relate to. i would like to see this artist adapt and refine their style, i feel they have a lot of potential but also (and i mean this in the nicest way possible, trust me its just critical feedback) room to improve in terms of their animation style, voice acting quality, artistic and visual quality, etc. Good luck to you author and hope to see you on newgrounds in the future.
mustachewax responds:
Damn. Thanks for the feedback.
...Wow, I didn't think a show about a woman's sex life could be so gay; bravo.
Joke carried on long enough, but the dog joke didn't seem realitic enough. Yes, it's a sitcom none of it's real, but a little connection helps. A dog using a phone is not one of them.
Graphics could improve...a lot.