Amusing, Laughed at the end.
Very good for a first creation, and don't worry about whether people will like it, just write/create what you believe is best, that way you can leave it knowing you put everything you could into it and if people don't like it, well, that's their opinion. the only flaw I see is it is so short, but since its a first try people shouldn't expect you to make a long game. good luck on the "sequel" :)
And yes, that ending was kind of trolly, but in a good humorous way.