Very nice animation, I loved the art style on it. You should make a full animation series for this :D
Reviews for "Adventurer"
Nothing really bad about it, jus needs more detail, more filling of the basic storyline concepts as there are hundreds if not thousands of these on Newgrounds and you are probably going to get unnecessarily harshly judged as your one has made it onto the front page along with many others which were more in-depth.
Also the music you used is on about four other recent pieces which have made front page. I know how hard it is to find decent music but I'm sure that you could have been aware of this and tried to find something else...
francisyfl responds:
god .... its was for a tournament, here on newgrounds, thats why you see others used the same song, it was the theme of that round ... gosh ...
When you have a limited skill for animation, it can be hard to make a good video.
Should had just had the adventurer fill out an "hero application". What you portrayed was the standard adventurer cycle
Epic.
It keeps everyone wondering just what the hell is the story about. What is her motivations, what is inside the locket, why is the king giving her that sword, why is the song identical to that work of flash I saw somewhere in newgrounds, and what is the monster's purpose in all of this other than becoming the dreaded which isn't really a dread to end the whole flash in.
A crossover with another work would be nice.