I predict that this is your first game c: As your first game, this is good. The arrows and objects that are supposed to be clicked work and the rest of the game falls into it's sequence of events well. Yes it's short, but hey, this probably took you some time. This is a very good start and I hope you're able to post more as you get better.
Reviews for "Rotten Elementary"
ZiaoChaotic responds:
Thank you! I FINALLY GOT ONE FREAKING GOOD REVIEW!!! It is not my first game, but it is more improved than my other games. It took me two days to make this, as it said in the end. Exciting NEWS ALERT! I am working on Rotten High, because obviously no one cares about Middle School. Rotten High will have more title screen features, longer, better story, and better art! :D CAN'T WAIT TO FINISH IT AND PUBLISH IT ON NEWGROUNDS!
- ZiaoChaotic
A definite improvement on your earlier games, it's not great, but it's nice to see that you've improved quite a bit.
It's an early work, so I think that can cover a lot of problems. I've given you two for effort because Hey, I can't program!
I have a big problem with the art. This is a basic thing, and it looks as though my six year old son could have done better. How hard is it, even with the absolute WORST paint program, do draw a stick figure or a shelf? I'm not looking for high art, but would have liked to see effort put into it if you're going to drop it into a public space.
Good effort, but you need some serious focus on art. I can only hope that this improves as you are spending less time coding and more time creating ambiance. This is a crowded genre, and bad art does NOT help you stand out in a good way.
Seems like a lesser version of Riddle School, but it's cool anyways.
Ugh, art sucks, story sucks, I don't even know how he got in to dentition! At least it wasn't glichy.
ZiaoChaotic responds:
If you looked at the description, you'd know how he got into detention. :/