The animation appeared fuzzy and the lack of sound effects prevented me from really getting interested in it. The story was lacking in general uniqueness or puissance. I hope to see your work improve as time goes on. Best of luck!
Reviews for "The Swell Endeavor"
jabzinaut responds:
I dig it, thanks for the view/vote anyways!
I actually liked it a lot without the sound effects. It fit the music very well. Great entry for the contest, and I liked the animation style. It reminds me of some other style that I also like.
jabzinaut responds:
Righteous, man, much appreciated!
I really like it! My only reason for not giving you a perfect score is because I think you could have done much more with the fight scene. I've been on newgrounds and other sites like it since like 2005, and I think you're going to go quite far! Keep up the good work, I can't wait for the sequel!
jabzinaut responds:
I had so many other ideas to cram in, but definitely look for them in the next installment! Wow, thanks man, I seriously appreciate that!
I like the animation style in this and it fits the track well, but it felt a little dull without any sound effects or anything. You don't want to distract from the music too much, but a silent high five just doesn't feel quite the same.
jabzinaut responds:
True that, I tried lining up a lot of the actions with the various tones in the music, but totally get where you're coming from, thanks for the feedback!
my mind wandered of, you need more compelling stuff
jabzinaut responds:
You know, I knew I shouldve had them just eat waffles for the whole time...dammit. COME ON!