very deep and thought provoking. a good tale of the moral dillema's one can face. animation flowed well but was a little basic. audio was excellent. keep at it and your animation will get better. hoping to see more in the future. you should consider making this a series
Reviews for "Green Sky"
Mrcoleman responds:
Thanks for the review. I'll never stop animating and hopefully I'll get to make a series on Newgrounds. One worth watching.
An interesting concept. One thing I notice is the lack of details in different areas. At around :29 in, the guy that's standing against the wall seems to be a bit...off. His hands are tiny, but his feet are huge. I'm not sure if you were trying to make him look like he was leaning back. His legs seem to be over half of his body.
The bookshelves around 3:15 look crooked too.
I think you've got potential. The voices are nice, and the story is interesting.
Mrcoleman responds:
Haha, I guess I need to work on my proportions and perspective then. Thanks for bringing that to my attention, I'll make sure to work on that in my next animation.