Wow, I remember you on Youtube. You made those funny CD-iZelda parodies.
Nice to see you here on Newgrounds man.
Reviews for "Cartoon Genders"
Pennaz responds:
Thank you very much! :)
The audio quality ruined it for my i'm sorry. It was difficult to understand and your accent made it worse. A test that helped my friend in animation was he would play his videos and only accept the audio quality if he could understand each word perfectly in the next room. Perhaps you should do that to test next time?
Best of luck.
Pennaz responds:
That's actually a pretty clever idea! Thank you for your help, I'll try it next time I'll need dubs!
Now I love your animation and your style. It looks beautiful and looks pretty smooth. The joke, though done before, was actually a nice different approach. My turnoffs with this was the sound. It was a bit too distorted and noisy with the voice actors breathing in to the mic. Not to mention the voice acting at times did seem a bit too flat. But other than that, nice work.
The story was good enough to get the point across, and the joke was pretty funny, but the poor sound quality really distracted from the project.
Idea 4/5
Animation 5/5
Art style 5/5
Text 5/5
Voice Quality 2/5
All it needs is smooth voice recording, beside that, the narator's voice needs some work