While the art style and animation was lackluster (the explosion as an example), I still feel that this was very enjoyable. I finished watching it with a smile on my face, so that's a major point for writer, despite the lack of dialogue. So as far as animation goes, it gets a couple points for not being terrible, and as far as the animation being overall alright, I give it a 3.5!
I don't see you winning NATA this year, but keep it up and I can see you going places.
Thank you for the review! Yeah, I don't expect to make it in the Novice Round, but at least I tried something new, and that's what matters to me!
music sucked. animation was alright, but felt like some of the movement could have been fluider. You've clearly got the spark all you need is a little practise.
Yeah thanks! I guess I just liked the song and that's why I put it in there.
Pretty funny, if you ask me. In a good way, of course.
A lot less quality from the rest of yours, though...
Oh no, on the youtube version, it has higher quality for some reason. Also, you can change the quality of the movie by hitting that little gear in the corner of the video.
I'm a bit mixed here. Although I did enjoy the story and the animation, I have to say that the design of the buildings, items, and characters are a bit lazy at times. Also the pacing on this was a bit fast, right when I saw the scientist grab the jet pack and saw the bomb at the bank I already knew how the rest of this story was going to play out. I can appreciate animation that can tell the whole story without words, but I think this would have been suited with some voice acting. There are no sound effects, which I think there should have been, plus the music although good, didn't fit with the animation. I still liked it though, the story was really sold me on it, even though the pacing wasn't done well.
|| Cheers ||
*Good Artwork
*Great Animation
*Okay Music
*Superb Story
|| Jeers ||
*No Sound
Thank you for the honest review. I was aware of the pacing, but didn't know how to make it better. And yeah, I just liked the song, but I can see how it doesn't fit. Also for the backgrounds, I don't have photoshop, so I had to draw it with flash, which was terrible. Thanks for the review!
Not to shabby. It feels too long, i lost attention 45 secs in
Thanks for being honest.