Well that was both sad and beautiful. The sketchy style of animation looks good, the atmosphere simple but all the people full of expression. That female voice was a bit low though, had to turn up the volume a bit to hear her, could've been balanced bettern in comparisson to ther voices. But either way, this was great, hope the next animation won't be 3 years off. :) Keep up the good work!
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Awesome job your scene choice and story telling was awesome. The mechanical skills and mastery of flash will come later. Only critique was the level of the voices sometimes got jumbled
....started as a solid 4, but then the those guys on the street appeared and the story went down the toilet, THEY KILLED A CAT, AND THE CAT IS IN A FUCKING BOX W-H-A-T-H-E-F-U-C-K
Pissed off, why did u kill the damn cat, literally nonsense,go get some mental health attention AS SOON AS POSSIBLE..
.....DAMN.
Where the quality could use some work, no ammount of skill can replace time put into a project. This was a quite good one, and at leas 70% longer the a good number of the animations put up here. Story is always more important then graphics, and there is alot of story here.
I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future, you can only get better with each project eh?
I liked this. I don't care about the animation quality, the structure or the voice acting. A lot of people out there can replicate those qualities at a professional level. What I do care about is that you spent a lot of time on this and put your heart and soul into it, telling a unique story with familiar assets.
It's very honest for what it is.
Thanks for making this, I am impressed :)