do what? The animation is so gross. But I guess I like it.
Reviews for "The Fizzy Drink."
oh, right, thank you. You know I was looking for a reminder as to why I have no hope left in humanity. It's because your long, iffy animated ramble says nothing more then "alcohol gooood..." come on, this is a place for ART, not ... this.... This is something I'd expect to be written by Ray Bradbury, if he got drunk, AND HIGH. It's just too simple, too meaningless, and too unintelligent to get any praise from me.. You got three stars at least cause I've seen worse, and you're vocabulary extends beyond "another bartender"
TaraGraphika responds:
FIRST, Your welcome. Umm....actually, what's she's drinking is Fizzy drink....if you read the description of this video, it's called Drunk by a Fizzy Drink. Not alcohol. Usually, if I wanted her to look like she was drinking alcohol, the tin can will be colored green. TWO, I like how you refer Ray Bradbury:) THREE, Well...I'm here to get criticisms... Actually, your doing me a favor in helping to be a better animator for, if not, you wouldn't be reviewing my video:)...So Thank you for that:D
I don't know if you were going for an artistic piece or a funny one but I don't really think it hit either in my opinion. While I do appreciate your vast and varied vocabulary (obviously you are well educated) I don't really feel that this video did anything particularly special. The art was good and the voice acting was excellent, but the meat of the video was nothing more than a rambling nonsensical rant of someone who was drunk off of a non alcoholic beverage. Could have been funny if it had more jokes. Maybe it could have been more artistic if the rant had more of a meaning than "this shit is good,"
As it is, it hit neither and ended up a rather amorphous blob of a video with no substance or structure to give shape to either story or meaning. I like your artstyle and Elspeth has a very lovely voice that I'd like to hear in future videos. Those are both positives, its just the meat of the story thats the problems.
My advice to you is I think you should perhaps set a goal as to what you are trying to accomplish with a video (IE: are you trying to make people laugh? Make them think? Entertain them with an interesting story? Confuse them?) and try to design the video around that purpose. You have some talent and with some work you could be a pretty awesome animator. Hell if you don't want to do the humor thing that could be good. 90% of newgrounds animation is humor related anyways. It would be nice to see something new out there.
Anyways, keep up the good work. I hope you found this constructive and I'll follow your videos because I get the feeling I'm going to see more of your work in the future. :)
Good Luck!
TaraGraphika responds:
1.Thank you for your advice. Yes, I do feel this is well constructive, your well educated yourself.
2.Elspeth is an AWESOME voice actress, believe that:)
3.Yeah, I'll try to accomplish a goal/message. The next video will have that. Promise.
4. Thank you very much for taking your time reviewing my work and to follow me on my videos. It helps a lot:)
To me the animation was just bizarre, practically hitting a bull's eye with the uncanny valley and really I have no idea what she was saying. I mean, sure in a literal sense I understand what words she was saying but I have no idea what she was getting at in the slightest. The voice acting was good though, I'll give you that, and the music was nice.
i..i i dont get is...