Not bad. Really cool animation style and goes well with the music. I love random things but next animation though try to add a bit of story as well to it so it gives your work more depth and feel.
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spacefader responds:
Thanks man. Yeah the story is pretty simple I guess, I was more going for a mood than anything, just thought of a basic sleazy tale of a guy trying to pick up girls in an intergallactic context ala 80s sci-fi. This is my first attempt at animation so I guess I tried to concentrate more on developing a visual continuity than anything. You may not like the next video I am working on which is going to just be vignettes to music with no story ha ha. Anyway thanks for the feedback, at some point when I master the animation process I hope to work on a more rounded story.
Um I see why this one doesn't have very many views. The ending made no sense...then again so far you haven't made any sense. I have no idea what direction you are intending to go with your work.
spacefader responds:
one day I hope to make animations in flash about pokemon having sex.
He smiled real big at the beginning and cigarette should have fallen out but it magically stayed on his lip. You also had some scenes where the edges were very clean and others where the edges of the objects were blurry. Okay why didn't he run when the tentacles started coming out of her chest?
spacefader responds:
Shit, you are right, I have to rethink my whole approach.
I honestly don´t get your animations, they´re well animated and the retro look is nice too but what is the deal with making so bizarre animations?! It´s not creative, if that´s what you were aiming for, it´s just silly; because you have talent but it´s rather wasted if you have no story to develop with your animations...
spacefader responds:
Ok, I will make more, less creative, more silly, I understand, I need to waste my talent and I will do so sir!