reminds me of psychicpebbles
Reviews for "PokePooP"
Not bad. I like it. But you should improve the sound quality.
For your first time is quite good. The animation was well done to an extent. Some of the jokes weren't truly funny, so much as unexpected or disgusting. The fat boy slurping the poop wasnt "ha ha" worthy. Although him recognizing us watching the video and leaving in the manner he did was up to a light giggle quota. Trying to make any flash animation's jokes composed of 1/2 crude jokes, isnt always the best option. Not too many of the portals movies that have a load of nasty jokes in it make it to the 4.0 score. If you want someone to rewatch your flash more than once, you want to make the parts that they remember about the video to not be disgusting. The parts you want them to remember are the ones that make them full out chuckle unexpectedly, or make them open their eyes widely in awe. In truth, the only thing in any of the portals that i remember and replay thrice a week is a nasty vocal song about sex. It's nasty and has some sentimental value. Don't ask. LoL. In summary, make a viewer want to replay any of your flashes by putting in one, or more, parts to you flash that makes them laugh out loud, make them look at their friends with the biggest smile out of hilarious shock, or make a section of the flash that is over-the-top well drawn. A lot of people do that last one. Add a three second shot of a less cartoonish, more realistic and humanesque realism... most likely out of a jab at a joke that is thrown in there. I wish the best of luck to you and i can honestly tell that you have the makings of a front pager. and DAMN! only 16. well done bro. I gave you three stars because the animation and quality of the drawing, in and of itself, was not exactly "First Time" thoughts.
Good animation but not exactly an original idea
First off, I just wanted to say that you're a decent animator. You obviously have a good grasp of how good animation is done.
The thing is, your style is awful. It's incontrovertible that you completely ripped off of PsychicPebbles (and Oney's, to an extent) art style. There is little to no difference between your style and his. You didn't even attempt to make your style differentiatable from Zach's and blatantly stole the use of his squinting-eyed and exposed-gums facial expressions.
Not only did you fail to be original in "your" art style, you completely failed to be original in the overall idea of this animation. In the past year, I've seen so many Pokemon parodies. This is nothing new.
Your lack of originality disgusts me. As an animator, at least attempt to move Newgrounds forward with original ideas instead of sucking on the tits of others.