This should've gotten 1st! Can't stop laughing! Awesome!
Reviews for "The Dark Awesome Knight"
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Eh, I'll be fair with you. This didn't have a lot of personality. It all felt like I've seen it before and better; Egoraptor, Oney, SpeedoSausage... and I'm fairly sure you see them as inspiration, but I don't see anything in this animation that really puts this apart. The jokes kinda fell flat, the expressions weren't particularly wicked etc.
That being said, I can see you had fun making this and hope you have some form of interest to continue animating. What you need to try is finding your own style. What I suggest is not making a parody or pop culture reference and try writing/animating something you can call your own. That way, you can play with characters and art style as much as you want.
Kabuki46 responds:
I agree with you about the style! I just haven't found a particular style for myself yet so I'm still messing around and yes, this was made just for fun.
I'll keep note about that next time. :D
Ah yes, very funny, i'll fav that for a rainy day.
Well,
That was short.