You know i really look forward to these updates every month or so when i'm not reading in my free time. You manage to keep things fresh and i especially liked how you conveyed a new side to nylocke in this one and actually made him break out of charecter something i don't think he ever really did in the original TTA just staying as kind of a comical yet serious charecter.
I'm also quite happy that you didn't decide to just stay completely to the script of the original TTA the important events are there just not possibly in the way we expect or in the order we remember.
You and your partners keep up the great work :D