I like the style and quality!
There's room for improvements, but of course improvements come with time and trial.If you were to perfect this episode alone, that could take you a very long time, so I'm glad it was released now. You'll gradually improve over time.
I'm also aware that the quality of my voice acting isn't that good in this episode, but this was the first project I ever joined as a voice actor, but I've learned how to make better quality audio and remove noise properly. It'll be better in later episodes.