You are trying way too hard to be funny, animation isn't very good.
Reviews for "Game Grumps : Ego's Anger"
ok animation, quality of art needs improvement, and this clip has been done by others and was executed better.
Ehh. Animation was subpar imo. There are other fan-animations for Game Grumps that really polish off their frames; I saw a lot of motion-tweening and lack of artistic style.
A lot of the sustenance for this piece is from the comdey.
On the plus side, I like the homage to Ego's style of animation.
I'm sorry, but the animation quality here just isn't good enough. It feels like you just sort of messed around ontop of a pre-recorded audio file. I feel like this is only rated highly because of association with Game Grumps. This might be good for practice, but it would be nice to see some entirely original content if you're looking to iron things out.
I Did not find this funny. get the feeling the maker relied on the "laughs" from the sound more then the "story" of the Flash it self. was just 2 guys laughing over a game bug, not that amusing.